Ki
Hajar Dewantara Street 3
Jababeka,
Cikarang
Indonesia
Phone:
0822 3641 1432
Human Resources
Recruitment
PT. BNI Life
Insurance
Jendral
Sudirman Street 1
Central
Jakarta 10220
Indonesia
27th Mei 2017
Dear Human Resources Recruitment,
I would like to apply the post of
Operational Support Malang & Yogyakarta advertised in the Job Vacancy
website.
Even though I do not have the real work
experience, I have participated being Board of Director; Treasurer and Person
in Charge; Finance for a Club and some Events in my College activities. Moreover,
I am very interested in the world of banking and I am keen to pursue a career
in this area.
I have good accounting skill, numerical
skill, analytical skill, communication skill and I am able to work well in a
team and under pressure. I am a self-motivated, creative, critical thinking,
ambitious, confident and able to work on deadline. I also joined an Investment
Club in President University and I learnt how to invest and trading in the
world of economy. I have passion in mathematics and finance. I am good in
English because I have been studying in President University where the language
instruction and the environmental is using English. I am a fresh graduate of
Bachelor program and able to apply a job. My major is Science Management with
Finance and Banking concentration which leads me to be teach and deeper
understanding about worlds of banking and be able to do financing well. I have
excellent calculating skills as well. Having those knowledge and skills, I
would like to do my best to serve and share it by applying in your company.
Please find enclosed my CV. If you
require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I look forward to hearing the answer from
you.
Best regards,
Rana Reski
Hi Rana!
BalasHapusBringing up your passion in fiance and banking activity is good and I think it can make you to be hire easily in that way. in addition, your experience in your investment club which make you be more confident is really good to be written in the CL.
Thankyou!
HapusDear, Rana Reski. I have read many cover letters of our classmates and I found that yours is really full of self-confident, which is good. Also, you are trying to grab the employer's attention by mentioned your experience. However, need to be noticed that the first greeting, "Dear Human Resources Recruitment" it does not necessary to write it that way since it is already addressed to the department. Perhaps you may change it with "Dear, Sir/Mam". Also, you do not need to double type your ability in calculation twice which you mentioned for "I have excellent calculating skills as well" and "numerical skill", because basically both are same. I found typo for the month "Mei" should be "May". Last but not least, for the next time you can be more structure to divide which part talk about your strength, experience, educational background, and so on. It will be very helpful for the readers. Keep improving and keep that spirit in you :) :D
BalasHapusHi Rana!
BalasHapusYour cover letter is good. You have a lot of experience and very confidence. But you may arrange your sentence so that it is well organized. When you state your numerical skill you can continue with calculating skill and so on. Rather than continue with your character and back to your skills again. Keep it up!
Thankyou!
HapusHi, Rana! What a nice cover letter you made there! It would be better if you explain a little more about your experience on a club and some events.
BalasHapusBut overall, great cover letter!
good luck!
Dear Rana,
BalasHapusI found that your cover letter is really good. You mention many things about your university life and also you are really confidence. I only have one input while you explain about your contribution about the university's event. May be you can add the specific event that you join. Overall it is a good job!
Ki Hajar Dewantara Street 3
BalasHapusJababeka, Cikarang
Indonesia
Phone: 0822 3641 1432
Email: ranareski@gmail.com
Human Resources Recruitment
PT. BNI Life Insurance
Jendral Sudirman Street 1
Central Jakarta 10220
Indonesia
27th May 2017
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to apply the post of Operational Support Malang & Yogyakarta advertised in the Job Vacancy website.
I am a fresh graduate of Bachelor program and able to apply a job. I have been doing my internship program for 8 month in MayBank as a Teller. I have participated being Board of Director; Treasurer for a Dance Club and Person in Charge; Finance for an event such as Economic Students Competition in my College activities. Moreover, I am very interested in the world of banking and I am keen to pursue a career in this area.
I have good accounting skill, numerical skill, analytical skill, communication skill and I am able to work well in a team and under pressure. I am a self-motivated, creative, critical thinking, ambitious, confident and able to work on deadline. I also joined an Investment Club in President University and I learnt how to invest and trading in the world of economy. I have passion in mathematics and finance. I am good in English because I have been studying in President University where the language instruction and the environmental is using English. My major is Science Management with Finance and Banking concentration which leads me to be teach and deeper understanding about worlds of banking and be able to do financing well. Having those knowledge and skills, I would like to do my best to serve and share it by applying in your company.
Please find enclosed my CV. If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I look forward to hearing the answer from you.
Best regards,
Rana Reski