Example of Business Plan in PowerPoint

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So, today I would like to share you the example of a business plan.
Just click the link for the PowerPoint and you can directly go through see it^^

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_VLay9x66O5eHZHX2dvdGM0T3c

Describing Line Graph in Business Communication

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So today I would like to share about how to read a line graph and describe it in paragraph.

But before that, you guys should watch this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XATlmM286wg (just click the link) from IELTS for the detail information about describing the line graph in Business Communication. I have another great example for you to learn more. Keep staying!

After we look carefully the line graph above it is better for us to make the planning stage. Why? Because planning stage can lead or guide us to make a better information that we want to describe future. In this planning stage we only have to give the outline information that we had get, and not the very detail one because we gonna make several paragraph for describing it using the very detail information. Just take a look at the example.

The line graph illustrates the number of visiting students in tourism destinations between 2011 and 2014 with 4 years period.

            As we see, the report shows the number of visiting students in Paris increased but in the end decreased over the period, whereas the London that were visited increased sure but slowly. Meanwhile the number of visiting students in Rome had fluctuate.

            In 2011, the most popular tourism destinations with visiting students was Rome, being visited by 1800 students. This was far higher than Paris and London, which were visited approximately 1000-1500 students in period. After being the highest tourism destination in 2011, Rome unfortunately had substantially go down into 1200 students. However, apart from a brief rise again from 2012 to 2013, the number of visiting students towards Rome slightly decreased over in the year after.

            Meanwhile in contrast to this, students that visited the other two tourism destinations at some higher levels. Paris destination increased steadily until it overtook the number of visiting student towards Rome in 2012. It then felt down from 2013 to 2014. The only stable one for tourism destinations was London that went up slowly but sure from 2011 until 2014, also had exceeding Rome destination in the middle of 2012 and Paris destination in 2014. Finally, at the end of the period year the 3 destinations finished at almost the same number.

That's all from me! I hope you can learn from it and using the information wisely. Thank you for reading and have a nice day^^